https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4VPA9KO5FGQ&feature=youtu.be
I generally received positive feedback on my last pitch. It was exciting to hear what people were going to have to say because it was actually my first pitch. There seemed to be an agreement on some of the struggles of doing these elevator pitches, which is nice to know that I'm not alone. After finally being able to get feedback about my own pitch I made sure to focus on all of that but also I critiqued myself and tried to focus on some of the small things I noticed. I think doing this will really bring the entire thing together and make it look very professional.
Hey Shaun! I am glad you were able to take the feedback you received and utilize it to improve your elevator pitch! Your effort definitely goes noticed. Elevator pitches like this are awkward, but you did a great job! I am interested in learning more about your product and opportunity.
ReplyDeleteHey Shaun, I like your idea and your pitch was very good for your first time doing an elevator speech, I think that if you sped up your talking a little bit you could make your video a little shorter and easier to pay attention to for the full duration. You could try that or you could cut something out to make it a little shorter.
ReplyDeleteHey Shaun, I like that you took the feedback you received and were able to make a better elevator pitch because of it. It can be challenging to get a message across in such a short amount of time, but the practice is important to improve your elevator pitches. You did a good job communicating your idea in you elevator pitch.
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