I didn't do the past elevator pitch assignment, however I paid attention to what others were getting for feedback and tried to use some of those criticism when making my pitch. I have done elevator pitches before, but none were this long so this was new to me. It was also new in the sense that I was pitching a product and not myself, which it was I had previously done. I think getting more feedback now that I have my own video will be nice to see what I can personally improve, especially some of the smaller things that I may not have noticed. I think maybe doing a pitch in front of someone, even for this assignment, could actually help a lot.
Hey Shaun! Great job on your elevator pitch, especially since it was your first time! Taking the feedback that other students got on their pitch was very smart. I found it slightly uncomfortable pitching a product opportunity and idea as well instead of a short 30 second pitch about myself. I used an elevator pitch during Career Showcase when approaching different companies and their recruiters.
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ReplyDeleteGood job on your elevator pitch. It definitely seems like you read different feedback and were able to incorporate it into your pitch. You seemed to have a great grasp of your idea and you were able to pitch it very well. I agree that more feedback is always good, as it's the only way we can keep improving. Great work!